You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I will not be able to continue my evening course in which I am currently enrolled. As I am working in Walmart as a Service manager It is hard for me to focus on part-time studies. Sometimes, long working hours at my job make me tired

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I am not able to concentrate on my study. In a couple of weeks, my Manager is posting me at a high post so there will be more work coming for me. Since my Training is going to start in three weeks for my new Role I will not be available in the evening.

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, I will have to join the training session for

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posting as well which is After 6PM. I will appreciate that if you could postpone my class till August So that I could available till that time. Hopefully, You will understand my concern and try to cooperate with me. I look forward to hearing from you. yours Sincerely, Prabhjot Singh

prabhaulakh1999

Jun 24, 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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175 words

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