You have recently been in a sports centre and noticed some issues in the changing rooms. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the centre and say – What was the problem? – Explain why it is bothering you. – Suggest a possible solution.

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Dear Sir, I am Kiran,a permanent resident of Brampton,Ontario.I am working as an accountant at Scotiabank .I am writing

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letter to inform you about the issues that people are facing in the changing rooms of the sports

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. Sir,I have been a member of

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centre

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for the

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five years and I never complain about anything but now

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is high time.Yesterday,I was changing my clothes and suddenly one guy just come up as the door was not locked properly.All the doors of

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centre

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are almost broken.

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,there are no curtains in the rooms so I do not think that there is any privacy for the people

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changing their outfits. Since the property needs maintenance and nobody is taking care of it so most of the people are refusing to join it.In

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way,everybody will start going to distinct centres and

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centre

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will definitely be going to be closed.I would really appreciate it if you would call the carpenter and ask him to change all the locks.

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to that,new curtains

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lights should be installed in all the areas. Hope to get a positive response from your side. Yours sincerely, Kiran

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The picture below shows the difference in the layout of the conference centre in 2010 and 2025.

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