You have recently been in a sports centre and noticed some issues in the changing rooms. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the centre and say – What was the problem? – Explain why it is bothering you. – Suggest a possible solution.
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction in regard to the changing room of the sports centre and will provide some suggestions to improve it.
To begin
with, there is no cleanliness
and the floor is dirty and sticky .There is no place to keep our stuff .Moreover
,the lockers are broken. Over and above there is no cross ventilation which makes us feel suffocating. The more concerning is the curtain placed to cover the changing room. That curtain is so thin and transparent , everything can be visible.
This
little bit frustrating for me as its concerning to once safety , privacy and hygiene. Here are some suggestions to improve them, firstly
you can keep them as a full-time cleaner , and add some new lockers. Moreover
, curtains can be replaced with doors.
Thank you so much for your time and consideration. Looking forward to this
change.
Yours faithfully,
Stuti ShethSubmitted by kiranbaidwan064 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
