The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in new zealand in 2003 and 2013

The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in new zealand in 2003 and 2013
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The pie charts describe the information about
sales
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of internet buying for retail
sectors
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between two years 2003 and 2013 in the country called new zealand.
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, the films/music and books
sectors
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gained popularity over the period of time as their
sales
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rise in 2013 as compared to 2003.
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,
sales
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in the travelling and clothing
sectors
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are seen to reduce in 2013. In 2003, the film/music sector significantly increased from 21% to 33% in 2013 which made it stand at the top among other
sectors
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.
Sales
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of books increased by 3% in 2013. In 2003, the travelling sector was at the top of the chart with
overall
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sales
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of 36% but it reduced by 7% in 2013 acquiring 2nd position. The total revenue for clothes was 24% in 2003 but it significantly decreased by 8%.
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, the highest reduction in
sales
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was seen in the travelling sector in New Zealand in 2013.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, sectors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduce" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparative analysis
  • E-commerce
  • Retail sectors
  • Growth rate
  • Decade
  • Decline
  • Trends
  • Online transactions
  • Consumer behavior
  • Market share
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Digital era
  • Accessibility
  • User-friendly platform
  • Market dynamics
  • Predictive outlook
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