The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in new zealand in 2003 and 2013
The pie charts describe the information about
sales
of internet buying for retail sectors
between two years 2003 and 2013 in the country called new zealand.
Overall
, the films/music and books sectors
gained popularity over the period of time as their sales
rise in 2013 as compared to 2003. Whereas
, sales
in the travelling and clothing sectors
are seen to reduce in 2013.
In 2003, the film/music sector significantly increased from 21% to 33% in 2013 which made it stand at the top among other sectors
. Sales
of books increased by 3% in 2013.
In 2003, the travelling sector was at the top of the chart with overall
sales
of 36% but it reduced by 7% in 2013 acquiring 2nd position. The total revenue for clothes was 24% in 2003 but it significantly decreased by 8%.
Overall
, the highest reduction in sales
was seen in the travelling sector in New Zealand in 2013.Submitted by sku75179 on
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