The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned 

future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and 

make comparisons where relevant.
These two maps depict the revolution's future plan in the industrial
area
of Norbiton
town
. It is clearly obvious that
this
area
will witness massive constructions
such
as building an education institution , kids playing ground, medical centre, market store and a lot of new houses.
According to
the given graphs, we can see that the future plan involves establishing new roads with roundabouts. The new street will link the farmland and the industrial
area
with a bridge.
Moreover
, a new school with a playground will be established in the eastern part.
Nevertheless
, shops and a hospital will be placed in the south part; just to the left and the right newly planned and tiny roundabout. As it is clear, home buildings are scattered all around the industrial
area
and it is
also
expanded to reach across the river.
To sum up
, the future development plan in the
town
of Norbiton will involve removing all the old factories. By doing so,
this
town
will be a relaxing
town
and attractive for living.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, town with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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