You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask yoour manager about it. Writee a lettr to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give detail of the amount of time you need suggest how you work could be covered while you are away

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter requesting you to grant me a few days off from work as I am planning to visit Dubai for the wedding of my sister in the month of July. Earlier,the wedding was planned for December but the health of my father is not very well so

this

decision is taken at the

last

moment and now my family is preparing for

this

occasion.Everybody is so excited as we are going to meet her after five years. Since I am going abroad and I need at least 20 days off from the office to manage everything so I do apply for my personal time off for 10 days but still I need 10 more holidays.

Also

,I talked to Raman and he is ready to take full responsibility for work in my absence.

Moreover

, I will guide him through the phone whenever he needs my help.I would really appreciate it if you could approve my extra holidays. Hope to get a positive response from your side. Yours sincerely, Kiran

Submitted by kiranbaidwan064 on Sun Jun 25 2023

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