Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of modern society. Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Individualism has been gradually rooted in
society
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as our evolution and civilization progress. It is considered that holding the traditional and ancestor principles is the best approach to make
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social life, particularly in the value of respect both to family members and to
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. I firmly agree
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some justifications,
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as maintaining family harmony and increasing the sense of solidarity in
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. The foremost reason is to maintain unity in the households.
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family is the closest people that usually give us the hands to help us if we have severe conditions (very bad conditions). Respecting them, can increase their empathy for us and maintain harmonious relationships among family members.
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, when someone has sadness or serious problems they can assist us to gain a solution.
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, when the family has a medical need that requires
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money to get medication in the hospital, giving them financial assistance, of course, can
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them happy so that in the future they can
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do the same to help us.
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, becoming greedy and selfish individuals can get jeered by the community. Because social life is inclined to uphold solidarity values among them. Meanwhile, selfishness and egotism are far from the basis of solidarity itself.
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, not only will be they avoided by
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, but
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they can get negative attitudes as well. Taking Pancasila as the ideology of Indonesia as an example. From the beginning, when Soekarno proposed his ideas about national basis (Pancasila), he mentioned that unity in diversity is the biggest reason behind the five principles of Pancasila, so that those who do not follow that, represent that they do not want to become social members of Indonesia. To summarise, to make a better life in humanity or family, maintaining our respect and sympathy for them is salient because it can
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harmony in the family and lead make unity in
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • modern society
  • traditional values
  • familial bonds
  • community ties
  • collective well-being
  • individual gain
  • responsibility
  • care for others
  • neglect
  • isolation
  • honesty
  • respect
  • cooperation
  • individual greed
  • ethical conduct
  • social cohesion
  • crime rates
  • mental health
  • general happiness
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