You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter • describe the item. - Explain where and when you left it - say what action you would like the company to take - Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Ahmed Eldawy, one of your regular passengers. I am writing

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letter to report about my lost wallet that I lost on my trip from Cairo to Alexandria on 12th February.

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, I arrived at Cairo Train Station at 10:00 am to get on the

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train at 10:30 am, and I was received by a conductor who requested to check my ticket. Later on, after I was seated, another conductor asked me to present him with my ticket, which was in my wallet, and

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was when I lost it at 11:00 am.

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, I would appreciate to revert back to if it is found. It is a black leather wallet and it contains my credit card, identification card, driving license, insurance card and about 2000 Egyptian pounds.

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, feel free to contact me once it is located. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon, and thank you in advance. Faithfully, Ahmed Eldawy

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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