Some believe that it is beneficial to show foreign films while others feel this can have a negetive impact on local culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that
diplaying
Correct your spelling
playing
movies
from another countries
would have benefits Replace the adjective
another country
other countries
on
society. But some Change preposition
for
people
believe this
would negatively affect the culture of the country. In this
essay these
both views will be discussed. Correct determiner usage
apply
However
, it is an undeniable fact that the world
has become more
closer Change the word
apply
due to
the
globalization and cultural differences have influenced many societies where every entertainment media has imposed some influence Correct article usage
apply
in
peoples' life.
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on
Firstly
, films that are made outside of the country have different cultural backgrounds, which audience
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the audience
experience
and might find Fix the agreement mistake
experiences
it
interesting and entertaining. In the meantime, they gain more exposure to traditions. Correct pronoun usage
apply
This
would help to understand and improve human interactions in the
society. Especially, in a multinational country where Correct article usage
apply
people
live together in same
neighbourhood would get to know each Add an article
the same
others
cultural desires. Change to a genitive case
other's
Secondly
, people
experience various types of entertainment through this
films. Correct determiner usage
these
For example
, the Avatar movie was superhit all around the world
because of the 3D effects and graphics used and it had never caused any cultural impact in the world
.
In contrast
to this
, some people
believe that some movies
might impose negativity on the culture. This
can happen because of the violence and drawback effects on human feelings. Some people
may concern about the psychological behaviours of the community after such
movies
. For instant
, some Add an article
an instant
movies
about war may impact on
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the
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peoples'
mentality to think Change noun form
people's
other
nationalities as enemies.
I strongly believe that some Change preposition
of other
movies
with violence would bring crons in human
mind whether it is foreign or not. It is important to know other cultures and live Correct article usage
the human
with
harmony and these types of entertainment bring more experience Change preposition
in
in
human beings. As the Change preposition
to
world
grow
and Change the verb form
grows
people
are living in a global village it is important to know and respect others cultures and this
provide
a better platform for that.
Change the verb form
provides
To conclude
, movies
from other countries are advantageous to watch although
some might have disadvantages over the cultural backgrounds.Submitted by anushakdu1982 on
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