It has been said that the world is becoming a global village in which there are no boundaries to trade and communication. Do the benefits of globalisation outweigh the drawbacks?

Nowadays, there is possible to reach everything
easyly
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easily
which they are even not close
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to them
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. Many people,
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happy to
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different
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cultures
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.
However
, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do
this
. In
this
essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why all over the world
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getting connected with export and
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communicate
and some of the challenges to be overcome. Let's begin by looking at the
adventages
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advantages
of there
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no boundaries to trade and communication. One of the main positives of there is no limit
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to
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going to new places. What I mean by
this
is that you have the chance to go
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to different
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countries
without no
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doubt
. you can meet there with
new
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a new
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culture.
For instance
, the
conturies
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countries
centuries
have
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a special
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celebrating
day
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days
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. you can join there and learn
their
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backround
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background
.
This
can
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make
you more rounded
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as a person.
Secondly
, having
comunication
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communication
can lead to
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getting
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more friends. Take
online
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the online
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meeting platform for an example.
In addition
,
human
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humans
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feel alone in their
communty
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community
but you can find someone who
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you
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them
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,
via
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online and you do not have to be alone again. Turning to the other side of the argument, the disease is more
commen
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common
. To be more precise,
countries
have different conditions So the
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immune
system is used
to
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according to
that habitat. To be more precise,
the
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travel is
big
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a big
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problem for
cariying
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carrying
to sickness.
This
often leads to more illness. Another issue is that it can be difficult to trust new
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friends
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.
In other words
, when you meet a new friend who is not
your
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community, it is hard to trust them.
becouse
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because
they could say lie and it is not possible to check correct or not.
This
process takes time and
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challenging if there is kidnapping to deal with.
Al
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things considered, reaching all people and
countries
are bring some experience. you need to weigh up the pros of meeting
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wide range of people and seeing new places, and the cons of the disease and meeting
bad
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the bad
a bad
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person
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people
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. Personally, I believe the benefits in
term
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of exploring new
countries
and cultures and getting new friends eventually outweigh any negatives.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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