The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in new zealand in 2003 and 2013

The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in new zealand in 2003 and 2013
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The pie chart describes the information about the
sales
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of retail
sectors
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in two years 2003 and 2013 in a country called New Zealand.
Overall
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, the film/music and books
sectors
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were stands for the highest
sales
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in 2013 compared to 2003.
Whereas
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the travelling and clothing
sectors
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are seen reduced in 2013. in 2003, the film/music
sector
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significantly increased from 21% to 33% in 2013 which made it stand at the top among other
sectors
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.
sales
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books increased by 3% in 2013. in 2003, the travelling
sector
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was at the top of the chart but it was reduced by 7% in 2013, and the
sales
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of the clothing
sector
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was 24% in 2003 and significantly decreased by 8% in 2013. in summary, the highest reduction in
sales
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retail
sector
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in New Zealand was in the clothing
sector
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, sectors, sector with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparative analysis
  • E-commerce
  • Retail sectors
  • Growth rate
  • Decade
  • Decline
  • Trends
  • Online transactions
  • Consumer behavior
  • Market share
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Digital era
  • Accessibility
  • User-friendly platform
  • Market dynamics
  • Predictive outlook
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