The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in new zealand in 2003 and 2013
The pie chart describes the information about the
sales
of retail sectors
in two years 2003 and 2013 in a country called New Zealand.
Overall
, the film/music and books sectors
were stands for the highest sales
in 2013 compared to 2003. Whereas
the travelling and clothing sectors
are seen reduced in 2013.
in 2003, the film/music sector
significantly increased from 21% to 33% in 2013 which made it stand at the top among other sectors
. sales
books increased by 3% in 2013.
in 2003, the travelling sector
was at the top of the chart but it was reduced by 7% in 2013, and the sales
of the clothing sector
was 24% in 2003 and significantly decreased by 8% in 2013.
in summary, the highest reduction in sales
retail sector
in New Zealand was in the clothing sector
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