You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter describe the item explain where and when you left it say what action you would like the company to take Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to bring to your attention
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I am Ruqayah one of your regular passengers I lost my
ipad
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yesterday on the 8th of June I was travelling from Riyadh to Jeddah .
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, we arrived in Dammam the train stop around 15 Minutes
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, I
was still stay
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the same seat I never moved suddenly, a child come to me needs some help to find his mother I went to another compartment
for
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to
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look out
his
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for his
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mother
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monther
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mother
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finally
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we found his
monther
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mother
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moreover
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, I went to buy food to eat when I back my compartment someone
was sit
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my seat ,
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I sit another seat
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I did not check my staff when I arrived the office at 7 AM I did not find the
ipad
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iPad
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, the
color
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of the
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is
a
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apply
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black, the device is
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more
modren
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modern
It is from 2022 there are stickers on the cover it has two cameras .
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, I would be grateful if you can contact the station staff
please
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and please
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do the needful Thank you in advance. Yours sincerely, Ruqayah
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • valuable
  • distinguishing features
  • route
  • carriage
  • seat number
  • lost and found department
  • appropriate steps
  • contact information
  • swift and positive action
  • item of value
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