The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the total number of
telephone
calls in the minute in three different categories namely, local, national and international, and mobiles in period
of 8 Add an article
a period
the period
years
from 1995 to 2002 in the UK.
Overall
, the local telephone
calls had the highest amount in
all time. Change preposition
of
However
, the trend
of it,
was not upward in all Remove the comma
apply
years
. Although
Correct article usage
the mobiles
mobiles
Change the noun form
mobile
trend
was upward, it had the least ratio. Also
, the trend
of national and international calls as
Correct your spelling
is
same
as the mobiles.
In 1995 local Correct article usage
the same
telephone
calls was
about 70 Change the verb form
were
billion
minutes
which was doubled from national and international calls. After 4 years
, telephone
calls reached at
its pick 90 Remove the preposition
apply
billion
minutes
. However
, at
those Change preposition
in
years
national calls rose slightly and reached 50 billion
minutes
. After 1999, upward
Add an article
the upward
trend
continued and in 2002 reached at
it pick about 60 Remove the preposition
apply
billion
minutes
. But, local calls started to decrease and in three years
about 20 billion
calls fell.
Mobile phone
in 1995, had the least ratio under 5 Fix the agreement mistake
phones
billion
minutes
. The trend
of that was upward. Although
from 1995 to 1998 rose slightly, from 1999 to 2002 increased sharply and each year almost 5 to 10 billion
minutes
added
, and in 2002 the total number of mobile calls reached more Add a missing verb
were added
than40
Correct your spelling
than 40
billion
minutes
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words telephone, years, trend, billion, minutes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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