The chart below shows the average hours worked per day by married men and women in paid employment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart shows the average
hours
spent working per day
by married couples in paid employment between the age of twenty-four to forty-four and forty-five to sixty-four.
There are
almost no difference between the Change the verb form
is
time
spent by husbands nor
wives from different ages. The males all use about seven and two Correct word choice
and
hours
on
paid employment and a half Change preposition
of
hours
on
housework per Change preposition
of
day
. And married women all spend about ten hours
of their day
working even though, the younger wives spend a bit more time
doing housework, and the older ones spend a bit more on their jobs.
But the differences between both genders is
quite noticeable: the male partners spend more Correct subject-verb agreement
are
time
on their professions than their wives, whilst women use a larger proportion of their day
doing housework and working in general.
Overall
, the time
spent on different types of work does not vary between people of the same gender despite the change of
their age; and women spend more Change preposition
in
time
caring, although
their partners spend more time
in their professions.Submitted by cwizjr on
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