The chart below shows the average hours worked per day by married men and women in paid employment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the average hours worked per day by married men and women in paid employment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart shows the average
hours
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spent working per
day
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by married couples in paid employment between the age of twenty-four to forty-four and forty-five to sixty-four. There
are
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almost no difference between the
time
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spent by husbands
nor
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and
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wives from different ages. The males all use about seven and two
hours
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on
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paid employment and a half
hours
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on
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of
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housework per
day
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. And married women all spend about ten
hours
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of their
day
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working even though, the younger wives spend a bit more
time
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doing housework, and the older ones spend a bit more on their jobs. But the differences between both genders
is
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quite noticeable: the male partners spend more
time
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on their professions than their wives, whilst women use a larger proportion of their
day
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doing housework and working in general.
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, the
time
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spent on different types of work does not vary between people of the same gender despite the change
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in
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their age; and women spend more
time
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caring,
although
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their partners spend more
time
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in their professions.
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