You have a suggestion for a park near your apartment building. Write a letter to your city's council board. In your letter: Describe who you are and what your suggestion is Explain why you think this suggestion will improve the park Detail when you would like to see this suggestion in action Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Councilor,
Dear Councilor,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction regarding the
park
which is near the apartment. I think some of my suggestions might be helpful to you. I can see the park
is getting less crowded nowadays.
I am John a cooperative member of the society council. As I saw a few days ago the park
is not in good condition, moreover
the Add a comma
,moreover
park
is littered with dirt and garbage. As it is a children's park
, there has a slide, a swing and see- saw
for the children to play. Add a hyphen
see-saw
Furthermore
I would like you to suggest there has to be a Add a comma
,Furthermore
club house
for the youngsters to play indoor games. Correct your spelling
clubhouse
This
will help people to refresh their minds and they will not feel bored at home. ,Additionally
there have to be more chairs in the garden for the senior people to sit, Add a comma
,Additionally
Besides
there have to be more trees in the garden so that I would look beautiful and that attracts more children and in the same way it will help the environment.
I would like you to take a look at the garden and consider my suggestion. Moreover
if you feel some of my suggestion is good, please feel free to speak. ,Add a comma
,Moreover
Secondly
we can Add a comma
,Secondly
also
arrange a meeting for the park
with other members for more suggestions. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
JohnSubmitted by vishwakarma.mangesh68 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite