The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
It is argued that the main purpose of
science
development is to promote the living standard of every individual.While
it is possible to develop science
solely out the
consideration of knowledge itself, I still agree with the proposal and I do believe that advancement in the scientific field Change preposition
of the
apply
to help Correct subject-verb agreement
applies
people
to live more convenient
and Change the word
conveniently
more
healthily.
On the one hand，I accept it is reasonable that growth in the scientific domain is served for the exploration purpose or theoretical Correct quantifier usage
apply
progresses
.Change the wording
progress
signs of progress
To begin
with, doing these projects is meaningful and significant in human history developmentWith the efforts of scientists, people
know who is their ancestor
、 how was the earth Fix the agreement mistake
ancestors
form
hundreds of millions of years ago, and how the university was created.Wrong verb form
formed
Although
this
kinds of knowledge undoubtedly have no help for human production and life directly，but
it Remove the conjunction
apply
stimulate
Change the verb form
stimulates
people
's creativity and thirst of
knowledge in the process of exploration.Change preposition
for
For example
, Marie curie's
curiosity about new elements Capitalize word
Curie's
lead
her to discover radium. But in Change the verb form
leads
this
process
she didn't realize that decades later, Add a comma
,process
this
new element would make a huge contribution to human nuclear research.Therefore
, the
scientific exploration is important, even if it Correct article usage
apply
seem
useless now.
Change the verb form
seems
However
, it is more practical and functional to develop technology around how to improve human life quality.Firstly
, the revolution of transportation dramatically change
the way Change the verb form
changes
people
travel.For instance
, with the advent of airplane
and trains, individuals can easily travel all around the world.It extremely improved the communication and integration of different cultures.Fix the agreement mistake
airplanes
Secondly
, the
Correct article usage
apply
machanized
agriculture Correct your spelling
mechanized
increase
food production rapidly.Change the verb form
increases
As a result
, many lives has
been saved in some poor countries Change the verb form
have
where
were suffered from serious famineCorrect word choice
that
..
Replace the punctuation
.
...
Last
but not the
least，the improvement of technology in Correct article usage
apply
medical
domain rise Correct article usage
the medical
life
expectancy of humans in the world.Correct article usage
the life
Hence
people
can receive healthier food and nice healthcare which large increase human's
welfare.
In conclusion, I can understand the reason why Change noun form
human
science
development should be focused on other field
. But I would argue that if the purpose of Change the wording
another field
other fields
science
is concentrated on people
's living standard
， the world will become more different.Fix the agreement mistake
standards
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