The charts
illustrates
the modes of transportation of students travelling to one of the universities in 2004 and 2009.
In 2004 , 4 Change the verb form
illustrate
percent
of people walked to the Change the spelling
per cent
university
Use synonyms
as
compared to 2009 which was 6%. 3% of students travelled by train in 2004 and it was 4 % in 2009. Change preposition
apply
Number
of scholars travelling by car Change the article
The number
reduced
by almost half in 2009.
33% came to the Add a missing verb
was reduced
university
by bus in 2004 Use synonyms
while
46% in 2009. There was a significant rise in students cycling to school which was doubled in 2009.
In the year 2006 , car parking charges Linking Words
was
introduced and a new bus stop was Change the verb form
were
contructed
in 2008 in the Correct your spelling
constructed
university
.
It can be concluded that Use synonyms
,
by the year 2009 bus became the main mode of transportation Remove the comma
apply
in contrast
to 2004 which was Linking Words
car
. Other forms of transport Add an article
a car
the car
was
train , bicycle and walking to the Correct subject-verb agreement
were
university
.Use synonyms
A