The charts show the main methods of transport of people traveling to one university in 2004 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts

illustrates

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the modes of transportation of students travelling to one of the universities in 2004 and 2009. In 2004 , 4

percent

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per cent

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of people walked to the

university

as

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compared to 2009 which was 6%. 3% of students travelled by train in 2004 and it was 4 % in 2009.

Number

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of scholars travelling by car

reduced

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was reduced

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by almost half in 2009. 33% came to the

university

by bus in 2004

while

46% in 2009. There was a significant rise in students cycling to school which was doubled in 2009. In the year 2006 , car parking charges

was

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introduced and a new bus stop was

contructed

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constructed

in 2008 in the

university

. It can be concluded that

,

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by the year 2009 bus became the main mode of transportation

in contrast

to 2004 which was

car

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a car

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. Other forms of transport

was

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were

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train , bicycle and walking to the

university

.