The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of weekly
income
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spending of family households in 1968 and 2018.
Overall
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, we can see the changes in the priority of fundamental human needs over the 5 decades. In 1968 most of the spending went for food necessities at 35% of the total
income
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. The graph shows that the numbers plummeted to 17% in 2018.
In addition
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to that, food, which was the main spending category in 1968, is no longer the biggest contributor to the spending
of
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apply
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incomes
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income
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in 2018. Leisure activities have dominated the most spending in the total expenses of weekly incomes at 22% in 2018.
Furthermore
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, housing appliances, which held 10% of the total spending in 1968 doubled to nearly 20% of the weekly
income
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in 2018. Some aspects of the basic necessities (the percentage of spending)
does
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do
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not really change throughout the years. Household goods
for instance
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remain at 13% of the percentage
weekly
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of weekly
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income
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in the
half century
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half-century
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period. Others,
such
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as fuel and power
also
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do not have any significant changes after the 50 years gap.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure patterns
  • proportion
  • weekly income
  • accounted for
  • total expenditure
  • housing and utility expenses
  • transportation costs
  • other expenses
  • education
  • healthcare
  • leisure activities
  • spending patterns
  • witnessed a considerable rise
  • experienced a substantial increase
  • allocating a larger proportion
  • reducing their expenditure
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