The diagram shows how chocolate is produced
The picture gives information about different steps in the process of manufacturing
chocolate
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there are a total of around 10 steps in the process of producing Linking Words
chocolate
which can be grouped into two main stages, beginning with growing a cacao tree and ending with producing Use synonyms
chocolate
.
The process commences when The cacao tree is grown in South America, Africa and Indonesia and the pods are ripe for harvest when they turn red. Use synonyms
Afterwards
the pods are split and the white cocoa beans are fermented under leaves before spreading in the sun to dry. The next stage is putting in the large sacks and transporting Add a comma
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by
train or lorry to take to the factory.
Turning to the other steps, cacao beans are roasted at the temperature of 350 degrees. Correct pronoun usage
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Then
, the beans are crushed and removed from their outer shell. In the final stage, Linking Words
this
inner part is pressed and the Linking Words
chocolate
is produced.Use synonyms
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