the maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010

the maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010
The given maps illustrate the changes in Stokeford village in 1930 and 210.
Overall
, there were some significant developments in which in 2010 had less green area than in 1930 full of houses and public facilities.
To begin
with, in 1930, on the north of Gardens, the farmland was transformed into a residential field in 2010.
Similarly
, the shops in the west of the primary school were demolished to build some houses nearby the river.
However
, the primary school remained with additional buildings and the post office opposite
this
building still existed until 2010.
In addition
, there was no renovation for the bridge on the south of the map.
Furthermore
, on the south of the gardens, the farmland along the river stoke was converted into a residency space.
Also
, there was a big transformation of the large house and the gardens (1930) located in the centre of the area which became a retirement home in 2010.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demolition
  • residential areas
  • infrastructure
  • urbanization
  • land use
  • farmlands
  • notable buildings
  • layout
  • developments
  • economic growth
  • population growth
  • amenities
  • transformation
  • expansion
  • reconstruction
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