The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts depict the information associated with people born in Australia and in other countries.
Overall
, it has been observed that people born in Australian cities
, towns
, and rural areas
with people born outside Australian cities
, towns
, and rural areas
from 1995 to 2010.
To start with, population growth
in cities
in 1995 is almost more than 40 per cent
. While
in towns
the figure for newborn babies is not exceeded by 20 per cent
in Australia. Whereas
rural areas
as compared to towns
show a slightly higher percentage of around 30 per cent
in 1995. But in 2010 cities
areas
statistics show an increase in the growth
of newborn babies by more than 60 percent. However
, the towns
and rural areas
percentage are at the same level of less than 20 per cent
.
On the other hand
, outside Australia, these figures are totally different in 1995 which is 60 per cent
of newborn babies in cities
. However
, the town’s population growth
rate is less than 20 per cent
, and the rural areas
' rate is 40 per cent
. In 2010, there is no change comes in the cities
' population growth
it is stagnant at 60 % but the
Change preposition
in the
towns
and rural areas
birth rate decreases by 10 to 5 per cent
respectively.Submitted by msulemanm9 on
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