The topic of whether
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should pay for
retirees
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and causing issues in many countries all around the world. I've come out with several opinions
as well as
some
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, with relevant examples to support my statements.
Providing
money
directly to
retirees
is not
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option.
Retirees
without good
money
managing
knowledgesChange the wording
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would waste those funds privided on
items or activities, causing a bigger financial
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which required more financial
aidsFix the agreement mistake
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to solve.
This
issue has been proven in
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country
such
as North Korea, where
government
aids promotes laziness to their people and reduce competition
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their society,
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further
reduceWrong verb form
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their
country
's
.
However
, it is somehow selfish to people who think they
aid the
retirees
. A clear example
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this
can be seen in
capitalistAdd an article
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country
such
as the United States, where
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veteran
wasn't receivesChange the verb form
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enough
supportsFix the agreement mistake
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from the
government
,and
forcedAdd a missing verb
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to live
homelessChange the adjective
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.
Besides
, the plan of saving up
money
for
retirement
might be
by unexpected events,
such
as medical payments, children's tuition fees or etc. It is
also
inhumane to reject people who
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helps.
retirees
are considered
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weaker
groupsFix the agreement mistake
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ofChange preposition
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our society as most of them already lost the ability to work and some of them would even need serious medical
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, which could be costly in
longCorrect article usage
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term.
In my opinion,
governmentAdd an article
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are not obliged to financially support the
retirees
in our
country
. In order to overcome
this
issue,
government
actions or
statuesCorrect your spelling
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should be set up, to make sure the
citizens
are able to save up sufficient
amountFix the agreement mistake
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of
money
to prepare for their
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. State actions
such
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deduction
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small portion of
citizens
' income, and
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it in a saving account for their
up comingCorrect your spelling
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retirement
.
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successful example regarding
this
opinion can be seen in Malaysia, where 10% of
Malaysian'sCorrect your spelling
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income will be deducted upon
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and deposited in a
state controlledAdd a hyphen
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saving agency. The
citizens
will only allow to use it after their
retirement
. The
government
can
also
funds
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public hospitals and clinics, to improve the medical quality and services of our local medical centre. In
this
case, the
retirees
would able to enjoy a better quality of medical treatment with the same amount of
money
they pay for.
This
has
also
been proven in Malaysia, where their
citizens
would only need to pay 2 Ringgits Malaysia in order to access full medical
at their local public hospitals and clinics.
In conclusion, the
government
givingWrong verb form
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money
directly to
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retirees
as
such
actionCorrect article usage
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could promote laziness.
Such
action could
also
increase the financial burden of the
country
, causing
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to reduce the budgets from other sources in order to continue their funding towards the
retirees
, which is unfair to
other groupChange the wording
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of
citizens
.
Nevertheless
, the interests of
retirees
should be
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care of as they are
also
part of the
country
, and they contributed to the
country
as well before their
retirement
. State officials should seek a balance when providing assistance, and overcome issues
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as proportionate ways as possible.