The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future
The given maps display the current and future situation in 2020 in the colleges’ area. There will be several improvements in the inner and outer environment.
By and large, the car park is planned to enlarge in the future
while
the footpath and back garden will be renovated in 2020. Linking Words
Furthermore
, there will be a new room for the classroom and the shop.
Turning into detail, it is apparent that the old entrance gate which is at the north and the old reception on the west side will be moving into the south nearby the Bus stop feeder, so the students and guests do not need to walk before entering the building hall. Linking Words
Similarly
, the library will be moving to the left corner of the building Linking Words
while
the right corner will be the classroom, so that four classrooms on the west of the colleges and left just one classroom on the eastern. Linking Words
However
, the lunch area will be in the same position. Linking Words
In addition
, the north-left side will be occupied by a shop next to the restrooms.Linking Words
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