The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010
The bar graph gives information on
comparison
of Correct article usage
a comparison
Australian's
residences between 1995 and 2010 based on their Change noun form
Australian
birth place
(in and outside Correct your spelling
birthplace
Australia
).
In 1995, people
who were born in australia
and outside Change the capitalization
Australia
australia
were live in Change the capitalization
Australia
cities
with Add an article
a percentage
percentage
above 50%. Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
Beside of
that, Change preposition
Besides
Percentage
of Correct article usage
the Percentage
people
who lived in town is 20 % below and 40 % below for people
who lived in rural areas.
For an
entire year of 2010, most of Change the article
the
people
in Add an article
the people
australia
lived in Change the capitalization
Australia
cities
with percentage
above 60%. Add an article
a percentage
However
in Add a comma
,However
this
year the number of people
who decided to lived
in Change the verb
live
Correct article usage
the rurals
rurals
Correct your spelling
rural
area
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
suprisingly
decrease Correct your spelling
surprisingly
until
10% below and the Change preposition
to
percentage
of people
who lived in town also
decrease above 10 % per categories
.
In summary, the Fix the agreement mistake
category
percentage
of people
who lived in cities
keep going up over Add an article
the year
a year
year
. Fix the agreement mistake
years
Mostly
Australian's Correct your spelling
Most
people
decided to lived
in Change the verb
live
cities
even though they were born in different countries.Submitted by Nabillaa808 on
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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