13. You recently assigned a contract of your home painting. The work is over but you are not satisfied with quality of work. Write a letter to the contractor for the same. In your letter • describe what you are not satisfied with • say what you want the contractor to do and your action plan • say what was good a bout the service

Dear Sir, I hope you are doing well
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my letter finds you well. Recently, I have hired your agency for my house painting
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I must tell you that I am not satisfied with the
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done by your employees. I was giving instructions to them at every point
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in one
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they
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to showcase their own expertise, so I allowed them to do
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so.
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sadly, I didn't like the colour they
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for my master bedroom
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they
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just made it look ugly. The whole house is on one side
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that single room
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the other side. There is no match between them. As the
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is accomplished from their side, I would request you to please come to my place and see the
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they have done. I want you to tell them to redo the
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of
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that room and make it look good
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other
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areas of the house.
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, I would like to tell you that your employees are very obedient and very good listeners
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they don't even utter a word in front of others unless it is required. So I really appreciate their patience level. Thank you for the
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! Looking forward to your positive reply. Yours
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, Shikha

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task response
State what you want in a clear, short plan with a time frame.
coherence
Put one idea in each paragraph to help the flow.
tone
Use polite words and avoid strong words like ugly when you can.
format
Check that the greeting and closing fit the letter style.
content
The letter asks the boss to come see the work and fix the room.
tone
You note good listening by workers, which shows fair talk.
structure
You close with thanks and hope for a quick reply.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • contract
  • paint
  • wall
  • color
  • finish
  • brush
  • drip
  • spot
  • stain
  • mask
  • prep
  • prime
  • sand
  • repaint
  • patch
  • area
  • room
  • ceiling
  • surface
  • match
  • tone
  • shade
  • timely
  • deadline
  • warranty
  • guarantee
  • refund
  • agreement
  • inspect
  • fix
  • repair
  • budget
  • estimate
  • clear
  • polite
  • clean
  • satisfied
  • unsatisfied
  • quality
  • service
  • contractor
  • supplier
  • communication
  • appointment
  • supervisor
  • supervise
  • proof
  • evidence
  • photo
  • note
  • request
  • response
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