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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relation people make?
Has that become a positive or negative development?

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These days, we can see significant changes in society more than before. The changes were caused by the high importance of technology in our lives. In
this
 essay, I will present both, the advantages and disadvantages of
this
 change.
To begin
 with, ease that technology gave us,
people
 can communicate with each other far away. In the modern world, we have smartphones which we can take everywhere. They have an of
lot
 functions that make our life comfortable,
such
 as
,
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 internet connection and phone calls. That made relationships between
people
 turn virtual. It has its advantages,
for instance
,
people
 are aware of different cultures and points of view. It affected society a
lot
 by making them open-minded.
On the other hand
, virtual interaction makes
people
 addicted to itself, of its easy accessibility and safety.
For example
, on the
internet
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 everyone can pretend to be another person and hide their real personality without any problem. After those long interactions,
people
 forget how to communicate in real life.
As a result
, we can see that rate of lonely
people
 has raised a
lot
 and the reason is the inability to interact in real life
As a consequence
, I think that every improvement has its negative and positive sides.
This
 time,
also
 technology development influenced society a
lot
 whether it's good or not
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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