Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices would help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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is a serious global problem

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that which is caused by traffic is one which can be tackled. I would agree that the primary way of doing

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would be to invest in the public

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infrastructure.

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, there are

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other ways.

People

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need to commute in order to travel to work

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many

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choose to travel to work in private

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which

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gridlock in many cities twice a day, and which

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rise to more serious problems. The fumes from these

cars

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cause air

pollution

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, resulting in poor quality, harmful air in our cities. These fumes are

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a major contributor to global warming. If

people

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used public

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of driving

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problem would be dramatically reduced. Cost and convenience are big factors in

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’s choice of

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governments need to invest money to ensure that they have a

transport

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system which is more effective than private car ownership.

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means that the system is reliable and

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capable of transporting large numbers of

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around the city cheaply and quickly. An example of a

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system is in Tokyo where millions of

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rely on public

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rather than driving themselves. An alternative solution to the problem is to encourage the use of electric

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. We already have the technology to produce electric

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which do not produce any fumes so do not result in air

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.

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, these

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are not as popular at present. The government could change

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by subsidizing car ownership through perhaps offering tax deductions when purchasing

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cars

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. They could

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offer free parking in city centres for electric

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. In conclusion, public investment in subsidized public

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infrastructure is certainly vital in order to tackle

pollution

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there are

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some other alternatives with regards to cleaner technology.