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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The below bar chart showed that the
frequency
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 of the
USA
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people
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 who had meals in the fast
food
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 shop in the
years
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 2003, 2006 and 2013.
Overall
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, it is noticed that US
people
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 ate in fast
food
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 shops mostly once a
week
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 in the
years
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 2003 and 2006,
whereas
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 they slightly minimised their
frequency
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 later, which only once or twice a month in the
year
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 2013. It is
also
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 stated that
people
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 in the
USA
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people
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 who had
food
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 in fast
food
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 shops every day, never and a few
times
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 a
year
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, all at the same
frequency
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 in the
years
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 2006 and 2013. From the
years
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 2016 and 2013, the highest
frequency
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 of the
USA
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people
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 who had the meal in fast
food
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 shops once a
week
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, were at 31% and 33%, respectively.
However
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, the highest
frequency
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 in 2013 of US citizens pursued fast
food
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 one or two
times
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 per month, same as the the highest proportion found in 2006, which was around 33%.
Furthermore
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,they had a similar
frequency
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 of eating junk
food
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 several
times
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 a
week
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 and a few
times
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 a
year
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. Around 20% of the US
people
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 had that
food
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 several
times
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 a
week
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 in 2016 and they reached the same proportion in 2006 and 2013 for having the
food
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 a few
times
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 a
year
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, 15%.
Additionally
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, in the
USA
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people
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 didn't have a regular habit of consuming fast
food
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, around 5% of
people
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 chose to consume it every day,
while
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 dropped to around 3% in the consumption of fast
food
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 from the
people
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 in America in the
year
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 between 2006 and 2013.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words frequency, usa, people, food, years, week, year, times with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast food consumption
  • dining frequency
  • decade overview
  • trend analysis
  • to dine out
  • fluctuation
  • sharp increase
  • gradual decline
  • eating habits
  • statistical comparison
  • consuming pattern
  • noteworthy change
  • anomaly
  • periodic comparison
  • data interpretation
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