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Most of the world's poor live in countries where tourism is a growing industry. The issue is that tourism does not benefit the poorest. How can the incomes generate by tourism benefir the poor? And how can we ensure that tourism does not destroy traditional cultures and ways of life?

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After the pandemic of covid, the
tourism
 industry become
growing
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 and increase significantly.
As a result
 of that situation, it makes the economy of the
countries
also
 enhance.
However
,
this
effect
 is not just for the
countries
 but
also
 can affect poor
people
. The
effect
 can be worse or great.
Tourism
countries
 can make a lot of new opportunities for jobs and reduce the unemployment rate. Another benefit
effect
, the tourist will know more about the local product and boost their
businesses
 as well.
Nevertheless
, it will not be an advantage to the country if the tourist
build
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 a new company. Not all foreign
businesses
 want to hire local
people
 to work together. At the same time, it will impact
for
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apply
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local
businesses
 and the economic industry will depend
to
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on
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 foreign
businesses
. In my opinion,
people
 who are
tourist
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tourists
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 will not destroy traditional
cultures
.
In other words
, precisely they want to learn and have a curiosity about traditional
cultures
such
 as history, art, and food. But some
countries
 in the world do not like
people
 to know the local
cultures
, some of them thought
that is
 a disrespectful way. They think their local
cultures
 are their identity. In conclusion, there are some negatives and positives
effect
 of
tourism
 for the poorest.
Tourism
 can create
a
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apply
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job
vacancy
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vacancies
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 and raise the employment rate.
Nonetheless
, it will be a problem if tourists create a new business because some of them just want to hire foreign
people
.
Also
, I think that they will respect their local
cultures
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culture
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 since they have an interest in it.
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