Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Many individuals continue to hold the view that innovative

society

should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in words, pictures, melody and film or in other ways. I believe that creativity should exist without any government restrictions because imagination is the key to success discuss the reasons in the following paragraphs with relevant examples.

Firstly

, creativity mother of innovation and

due to

that it can be useful and has a lot of benefits for

society

.

In other words

, ingenious

society

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are valuable sources of progress by helping people to do their life easier with

such

products as computers or mobile phones.

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are made from human imagination.

For example

, a decade ago, individuals had to go to another town to talk with their relatives and waste their time on transport. But, nowadays

due to

the innovation of

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it is far simpler to get in touch by messaging through a smartphone or other electronic devices.

Additionally

, technological progress is the product of inventive human beings.

Secondly

, creative musicians might change their mood for good and affect their mental health positively. By listening

music

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, people get satisfied and it can be helpful to reduce stress levels.

For instance

, researchers have found that when individuals listen to

music

, different hormones release, especially serotonin and dopamine. A combination of

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hormones can evoke feelings of joy,

whereas

calming tune relaxes the mind and the body which can decrease stress levels.

Music

composers understand the effects of

this

on the human brain and produce novel sounds in order to influence emotional conditions more intensively.

To sum up

, In my opinion, creativity might have various benefits for

society

such

as technological progress.

Also

, one of the innovations is

music

and

this

is beneficial for human mental health and mood.