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Several countries disburse salaries to jobless persons on a specific time frame basis. Some may say that it shows a positive impact on society, but in my opinion, it shouldn’t be done because it creates laziness among them and decreases the rate of employment.

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Nowadays,
people
 who are on benefits are increasing rapidly.
This
 is
due to
 the recession that the world is experiencing from the effects of the pandemic. Some
people
 say that sharing
people
's salaries with the jobless ones is of benefit not just for the
people
 but for society
while
 others are saying the opposite. In my opinion, it brings a negative impact on the citizens. On the one hand, using a portion of our taxes to help those who are less fortunate is something meaningful. It provides them hope that
people
 are still recognizing them and their needs.
For instance
, a person who got redundant from his work and applied for temporary help would benefit to reorganize himself and plan for the next step to be independent again.
On the other hand
, the help
that is
 being given by those who are fortunate to the jobless
people
 is usually being abused by the receiver. They tend to become lazy as they know that the government would not be able to stop supporting them as they are part of society.
For example
, in New Zealand, lots of locals are relying on the benefits that they get from our taxes. They could buy the things that they want even without working for them.
Also
, branded things like clothes and cars are being purchased by these
people
.
Furthermore
, these
people
 are being well taken care of by the government mainly because they need their votes for the election. Without these
people
, their future in politics will be in danger. To recapitulate, helping those who are really in need is ok but there should always be a limit. Without limitations, citizens could start abusing it and they become dependent on it.
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