The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information bt selecting and reporting the main features, and make comprarisons where relevant.

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The line charts compare electrical appliances owner and how long time households spent doing domestic staff in a country between 1920 and 2019.

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it is clear that

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key figures were increased to use in years.

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, working hours were significantly fall between 1960 and 2019. Between 1920 and 1960, Refrigerator uses hit a peak

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, in the next two decades steadily rose to %100.

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, it remained flat there between 1980 and 2019. There are similarities between refrigerators and vacuum cleaners.

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, vacuum cleaners soared %100 between 1920 and 2000 and stabilised the next decade. There was one noticeable exception,

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, washing machine uses rose gradually to %60 and

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stayed just above %70. It

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can be seen that Refrigerators and Vacuum cleaners came over washing machines between the beginning of 1940 and 1960.

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those years, working hours decreased from %50 to 20 between 1920 and 1960

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levelled off to approximately %10 in 2019.

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