Advantages and disadvantages of working from home. Give your opinion.

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this

period of technology, the way business is done has improved tremendously,

this

has enabled many people to opt to work from home.

However

this

option has both pros and cons which will be discussed

further

this

essay in detail.  Let us begin by looking at the advantages,

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from home has proven beneficial as

this

technique has saved a lot of our time that used to get wasted in commuting, considering how horrible the traffic situation is in our country, it is a matter of pleasure to get

such

an opportunity.

For instance

due to

the lack of public transportation in the Silicon Valley of India

that is

Bengaluru, on average an individual spends more than 75 minutes in traffic to cover 8 km of distance. 

On the contrary

, there is a perception that it is easier to get distracted in a comfortable environment. To cite an example, losing your focus

while

working because of the distant noise of tv and music in the house, prioritising sleep over duty, and long unofficial phone calls.

As a result

, for many, productivity suffers and procrastination increases.

Overall

, looking at both the benefits and drawbacks of working remotely, it is difficult to pick a side.

Nonetheless

, one should maintain a work-life balance in order to get the maximum benefits of

this

situation.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

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Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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