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Topic: Study abroad can be highly motivational for students and also inspire their dreams. However, whilst studying abroad can have a number of positive effects on students, there are also many difficulties that they may meet along the way. With this is in mind, it is more advantages to study at home. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that many people prefer to pursue academic studies at university rather than follow a vocational training course.
While
 nobody can deny the need for university graduates, I totally agree that more people should be encouraged to qualify as manual workers. There are two pivotal reasons why more workers must be trained in skilled professions
such
 as plumbing or electrical work.
Firstly
,
such
 people are an integral part of our daily lives.
For example
, when new buildings are constructed or household pipelines have problems, they are the ones who can undertake and address the situation.
Secondly
, when there are too many university graduates but a lack of vocational trainees, graduation unemployment is an unavoidable dilemma.
This
 can be
due to
 the fact that the demand for staff with high-level education falls short
while
 the supply is still increasing.
In contrast
, the need for
skillful
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 workers is rising but the availability of the workforce is not meeting
this
 demand.
Therefore
, more students must be motivated to attend vocational training courses. The onus is on schools to incorporate relevant subjects into the curriculum so that not all the emphasis is placed on preparation for academic study at schools.
For example
, workshops could provide an opportunity to learn hands-on skills, adapting the theory of physics lessons to practical applications. Many boys and girls are not academically inclined but
this
 does not mean that schools should consider them as failures. Parents should create a growth and open mindset for their children about the option of vocational training when witnessing their capacity not apt for academic study. In conclusion, I agree that it is vital that job-specific training be promoted other than just solely focusing on the academic path.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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