Topic: Study abroad can be highly motivational for students and also inspire their dreams. However, whilst studying abroad can have a number of positive effects on students, there are also many difficulties that they may meet along the way. With this is in mind, it is more advantages to study at home. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that many people prefer to pursue academic studies at university rather than follow a vocational training course.

While

nobody can deny the need for university graduates, I totally agree that more people should be encouraged to qualify as manual workers. There are two pivotal reasons why more workers must be trained in skilled professions

such

as plumbing or electrical work.

Firstly

such

people are an integral part of our daily lives.

For example

, when new buildings are constructed or household pipelines have problems, they are the ones who can undertake and address the situation.

Secondly

, when there are too many university graduates but a lack of vocational trainees, graduation unemployment is an unavoidable dilemma.

This

can be

due to

the fact that the demand for staff with high-level education falls short

while

the supply is still increasing.

In contrast

, the need for

skillful

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workers is rising but the availability of the workforce is not meeting

this

demand.

Therefore

, more students must be motivated to attend vocational training courses. The onus is on schools to incorporate relevant subjects into the curriculum so that not all the emphasis is placed on preparation for academic study at schools.

For example

, workshops could provide an opportunity to learn hands-on skills, adapting the theory of physics lessons to practical applications. Many boys and girls are not academically inclined but

this

does not mean that schools should consider them as failures. Parents should create a growth and open mindset for their children about the option of vocational training when witnessing their capacity not apt for academic study. In conclusion, I agree that it is vital that job-specific training be promoted other than just solely focusing on the academic path.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

286 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

broadens students' horizons
global awareness
educational facilities
intercultural communication
financial strain
cost of living
homesickness
cultural shock
mental health
academic performance
networking opportunities
career prospects
government policies
visa restrictions
support systems
adapting to a new culture

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