Some people argue that the government should spend money only on medical care and education but not on theatres or sport stadium.Do you agree or disagree?

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The lecture and the article are about helping Peregrine falcons.
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the
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suggests possible approaches to helping the species, the
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disputes the claims mentioned in the text.
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, the
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offers
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nesting sites by increasing awareness about
their
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nests that are located in the cities.
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argument is challenged by the
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because protecting the nests could be difficult
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the fact that they may occur in private areas.
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, it would be a tradeoff between humans’ and birds’ needs which is inconceivable.
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, the
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suggests protecting the birds from predators that indicate a danger towards them.
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, the
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’s stance is that these actions may help only some individuals but are not going to be
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useful
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for all the species.
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is because of the fact that the protection from some predators might give an opportunity
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others to evolve.
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puts forth the idea that people can treat and cure injured birds and help them recover.
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is certain that
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is not going to be possible
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the fact that people do not have enough resources to help all the falcons.
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both the
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and the
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are searching for
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ways of assisting extinct species, they view differently on the current approaches.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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