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Officials in your city have an empty space and are planning to build a zoo for recreational purposes. Some residents think that the place might be used for something more complex like a shopping mall or a movie theater. Write about 150-200 words defending one of the two options provided below. You should say why you support the topic and how it would help the residents around you. What problems are there with the other choice? Option A: The town’s municipality should build a zoo. Option B: The town‘s municipality should build something more complex.

First of all, I appreciate that you conduct
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 survey to know about the suggestion of residents. I think that building a Zoo is a good Idea As compared to a shopping mall or a movie theatre. As most people are getting unaware of forest living beings making a place for them would be a good approach to mingling with them.
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, Constructing shopping malls will be much more expensive as compared to zoos. It will be a perfect way to gain knowledge about distinct animals.
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, It would help our city to meet the economic growth by attracting more visitors. Whenever Non-residents will visit a zoo they will spread the beauty and importance of
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 to others so that they could come.
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 is how the popularity of our area will be at its peak in a few years. Even though I have expressed my opinion but I will support whatever decision will be taken by Authority.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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