The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. 🔸Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following maps illustrate the changes in university sports courts from 1990 until now.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that there are significant changes that can be found in the university sports courts, particularly the new fitness center
, and basketball court, Change the spelling
centre
while
the cafe and reception remained unchanged.
The most noteworthy alternation was that the park trees and a car park were eliminated, and constructed a new baseball court as well as
a huge tennis court.
Next,
the outdoor pool, which was the biggest facility in the university, was replaced by an indoor pool.
Following that, the changing room, which was located just behind the reception and size itself was extended, was moved to the fitness center
, which is new construction.
Change the spelling
centre
Lastly
, both the cafe and reception, which were located next to the outdoor pool, stayed unchanged.Submitted by Zolboo on
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