The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. 🔸Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The following maps illustrate the changes in university sports courts from 1990 until now. Looking from an

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perspective, it is readily apparent that there are significant changes that can be found in the university sports courts, particularly the new fitness

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, and basketball court,

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the cafe and reception remained unchanged. The most noteworthy alternation was that the park trees and a car park were eliminated, and constructed a new baseball court

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a huge tennis court.

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the outdoor pool, which was the biggest facility in the university, was replaced by an indoor pool. Following that, the changing room, which was located just behind the reception and size itself was extended, was moved to the fitness

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, which is new construction.

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, both the cafe and reception, which were located next to the outdoor pool, stayed unchanged.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

141 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Layout alterations
Refurbished
Demolished
Erected
Renovated
Sports facilities
Tennis courts
Basketball courts
Football fields
Athletics track
Encroachment
Accessibility
Landscaping
Infrastructure
Spatial arrangement
Ample space
Congested
Upgrade
Downgrade
Amenity
Displacement

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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. 🔸Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance, for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sportsperson or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion