The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university

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The plans above illustrate the
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layouts inside a
one person
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dormitory
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room
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and accommodation for 2 individuals.
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,
while
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the student
room
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for 2 persons has more
spaces
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, the opposite was seen in the
dormitory
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room
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for 1 individual. The
room
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for 1 person to stay is 6 meters long and 2.5 meters wide, and the price is 200$ per week. The facilities are simple, with the kitchen opposite the bathroom and a bed next to the window.
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, there is a
study
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desk
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next to the bed
for
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the
student
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to
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have a place
for studying
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.
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, there is a TV opposite the
desk
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to entertain after a long stressful day.
In the
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second plan, which is the structure of a 2 people
dormitory
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, has the same length and
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meters wider compared to the
room
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for 1 individual. The kitchen is turned around perpendicularly, making space to put a table and 2 chairs where students can socialize and watch TV. There are 2 beds in the
room
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, one remains the same compared to a single
dormitory
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and the other bed is perpendicular
with
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the first one and
are
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separated by 2 cupboards to make private spaces.
The
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study
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desk
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1 remains unchanged
while
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the
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study
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desk
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2 is at the edge of
bed
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2.
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, the
study
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desks are arranged opposite each other along both sides of the wall.
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, there is a TV opposite the chairs and table and next to the
study
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desk
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2.
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but not least, there is a bookshelf against the bathroom.
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