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The diagram shows differences in temperature zones between tropical mountains and temperate mountains. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram shows differences in temperature zones between tropical mountains and temperate mountains. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given diagram illustrates how
different
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 between Tropical and Temperate mountains based on temperature zones namely Warm
zone
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, Temperate
zone
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, Cool
zone
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,
Forest
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,
Alpine
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meadows
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 and Permanent
snow
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.
Overall
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,
It is clear that
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Tropical
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the Tropical
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mountain
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 is higher than
Temperate
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the Temperate
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mountain
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. Another striking feature is that
although
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 both of them have four similar zones consisting of
Cool
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a Cool
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zone
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,
Forest
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,
Alpine
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meadows
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 and Permanent
snow
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, the remaining zones just appear in Tropical
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mountain
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mountains
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. Looking first at the temperate
mountain
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, at
the
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a
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height
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 from 500
meters
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 (1000
feet
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) to about 1500
meters
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 (4700
feet
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),
this
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 area is
Cool
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a Cool
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zone
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, where giants, potatoes and flax can be grown. From these
meters
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 to about 1800
meters
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 (6100
feet
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), there is
forest
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 and it is
also
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 limited
for
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 broad-leaf trees.
Alpine
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meadows
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is
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are
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 the third
zone
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, from the top of the
forest
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zone
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 to 2800
meters
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 (9000
feet
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), where only spruce can exist.
Moreover
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,
Snow
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line
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lines
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 appear at the
height
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 of 2800
meters
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 (9000
feet
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) and from here to about 3800
meters
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 (12000
feet
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),
snow
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 can exist year by year.
On the other hand
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, the Warm
zone
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 is the first
zone
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 at Tropical
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mountain
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Mountain
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, which has a
height
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 of 500
meters
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 (1500
feet
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). In
this
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zone
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, many tropical crops can be grown well.
In addition
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, from 600
meters
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 (2000
feet
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) to 1800
meters
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 (5500
feet
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), the area which is used for coffee and cocos plantations is the Temperate
zone
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. Unlike the Temperate
mountain
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, the Cool
zone
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at
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here exists from 1800
meters
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 (5500
feet
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) to 3000
meters
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 (9500
feet
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) and only grain cultivation is possible to grow.
Although
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 the
height
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 of
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forest
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the forest
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 at Tropical
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mountain
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Mountain
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 (3000
meters
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 to 3900
meters
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) is higher than
its
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it's
it is
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 at Temperate
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mountain
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Mountain
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, the floristic composition in
this
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 area is maintained. Pine and firs are two of the plants which can grow in
Alpine
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meadows
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 from 3900
meters
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 (12900
feet
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) to 4400
meters
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 (14500
feet
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). From here to 5500
meters
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 (18200
feet
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), permanent
snow
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 is on the top of Tropical
mountain
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words zone, forest, alpine, meadows, snow, mountain, height, meters, feet with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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