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Some people believe today that everyone has a right to access to the Internet and that governments should provide this access for free. Other people believe that access to the internet is not a right and should be paid for like other services. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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 of the widely discussed issues nowadays is whether the
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access should be given by state
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authorities
 for free or the
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 users should pay for
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other services. A commonly held belief is that governments should provide
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free access to the web to users alike the wifi connections that they
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acquire
 for free in public spaces. It is good to have
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one should understand that
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 does not come for free to whom that
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 free hyperspace could
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 spot for viruses and more people will suffer from
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cyber criminals
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.
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, free access to the
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 to more problems
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volnerablity
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vulnerability
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criminal permissibility.
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, some people claim that
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cyberspace should be
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 many services which we obtain in everyday life.
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 should understand that the information highway is something that costs budget and
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 production expenses should be covered.
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, the World Wide Web is being progressed and it is costly to follow
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enlargment
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enlargement
 and integrate the new updates in the system.
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 something that will keep you up with the time. In conclusion, taking everything into account I would agree that
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 should be available to nations only when it is paid out
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because means to generate that are valuable.
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, the government should utilize the budget on more social
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 than on feeding all with the net.
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, all who
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 the
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 will find
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 way to get the funds to cover
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 expenses on the
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 traffic and will value the work of engineers who generate the connection.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • right to access
  • essential resources
  • digital economy
  • social equity
  • government responsibility
  • privately funded infrastructure
  • market dynamics
  • personal responsibility
  • fundamental right
  • user fees
  • innovation
  • economic growth
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