The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate how the design of an
island
was altered
due to
the assembly of some tourist attractions.
Overall
, a substantial number of new establishments have been built for visitors, including accommodations, restaurants, and swimming facilities and those have been constructed without demolishing the environment in large sizes.    Before the facilities’ construction, one area of the
island
’s area was filled only with trees and a beach
while
the other part was completely empty. Over time, these places were occupied by amenities for tourists like accommodation facilities, restaurants, reception centres, a pier for boating, and
swimming
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facility on the beach. Despite
this
, previously planted trees were not cut down to establish these constructions and most of the constructions were made in the middle or close to the beach.
In addition
, footpaths and vehicle tracks were
also
made.The footpath stretches throughout the
island
from the north to the south-east part of the
island
whereas
the vehicle track provides movement from east to south around the reception and restaurant  To summarise, the map proves that a deserted
island
has been turned into a tourist spot for the recreation and amusement of people in an environmentally-friendly way.
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