The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps below compared alternations in the layout of the museum over the ten years period.
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the museum has significantly reconstructed and renovated after the plan, Linking Words
whereas
some minor features witnessed no change.
Looking at the map in more detail, in the central part of Linking Words
this
building, the garden has been reduced its size because newly-built of the cafe sitting area and some fountains. Linking Words
In addition
, a toilet has been added to its north and Linking Words
therefore
the cafe originally spotted here which be shrunk by two-thirds. To the west of Linking Words
this
centre, the permanent exhibition Linking Words
room
has been demolished to make way for a restaurant and the temporary exhibition Use synonyms
room
.
The eastern part, in the past accounts for the biggest place, the permanent exhibition Use synonyms
room
, which has been expanded larger and replaced the bags and coats Use synonyms
room
and the shop, they have been relocated to the southwest side, the tickets entrance and exit on the southern of the building are kept intact.Use synonyms
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