IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7

The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The two maps below compared alternations in the layout of the museum over the ten years period.
Overall
Linking Words
,
it is clear that
Linking Words
 the museum has significantly reconstructed and renovated after the plan,
whereas
Linking Words
 some minor features witnessed no change. Looking at the map in more detail, in the central part of
this
Linking Words
 building, the garden has been reduced its size because newly-built of the cafe sitting area and some fountains.
In addition
Linking Words
, a toilet has been added to its north and
therefore
Linking Words
 the cafe originally spotted here which be shrunk by two-thirds. To the west of
this
Linking Words
 centre, the permanent exhibition
room
Use synonyms
 has been demolished to make way for a restaurant and the temporary exhibition
room
Use synonyms
. The eastern part, in the past accounts for the biggest place, the permanent exhibition
room
Use synonyms
, which has been expanded larger and replaced the bags and coats
room
Use synonyms
 and the shop, they have been relocated to the southwest side, the tickets entrance and exit on the southern of the building are kept intact.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
▼
Topic Vocabulary:
  • rectangular shape
  • central garden area
  • symmetrically arranged
  • expanded galleries
  • visitor flow management
  • temporary exhibition space
  • permanent gallery
  • visitor facilities
  • customer service focus
  • dedicated children's area
  • expanded restroom facilities
  • museum gardens
  • unoccupied outdoor space
  • shift towards long-term exhibits
What to do next:
Look at other essays: