The graph below shows the annual visitor spend for visitors to new zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 to 2014 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the annual visitor spend for visitors to new zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 to 2014

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates annual visitor spending money in New Zealand in the year 1996-2014 from different countries
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as Australia, the USA, the UK,Japan, and China.
It is clear that
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money spent in new zealand by tourists from all various countries increased from 1996 to 2014,
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There were some fluctuations along the way.
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with,In 1996 Australian visitors spent
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$1000 per person.Followed by remeaning tourists UK, and Japan, China spent
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$100 per person,
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, the USA invested $700 in 1996,
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Actually Australia had the highest expenditure of approximately
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$1000 reaching around
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$2000 ,
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, it drastically increased to around
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$2500 in the year 2006 .China was the lowest category compared with other cities.
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,all five countries of expenditure almost peaks at a high level in 2014.Japan peaked at 900NZ$ in 2002,
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it dropped to
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$500 in 2014.And
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from 2010 to 2014 USA expenditure draped by around 600NZ$.
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