You have recently moved to a new neighbourhood and would like to join a sports centre there. You have found a private sports club. Write a letter to the manager of the sports club. In your letter, introduce yourself say why are you interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g facilities, membership, costs etc.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you to get some information about your sports

club

as I recently moved to your neighbourhood village and am interested to join your

club

. My name is Shubi and I am 29 years old. My friend, he is a member of your

club

for the

last

year and I got to know about your facility from him. As I am a very good player in tennis,the main attraction for me is the tennis team which is playing at the city level every year and I have played tennis at the state level.

Moreover

, I heard that your

club

is surrounded by a green valley where I can relax during the evening time and can enjoy the greenery around the area.

Therefore

, if you could provide me with some relevant information about the timing and cost of membership

then

it will be a great help.

Also

, my wife is keen to participate in the annual sports function as a preparation member so is there any chance we can get a discount on joining fees? Please do not hesitate to contact me any time during the day at the given number. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely Shubi

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