The chart below show the number of people in Europe who were affected by four types of noise by day and by night in the cities and rural areas in 2007.

The chart below show the number of people in Europe who were affected by four types of noise by day and by night in the cities and rural areas in 2007.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The graphs depict, in the period time of 2007 in several cities and rural areas of Europe, the 4 noise types during the day and night, that many people complained about it. From an
overall
Linking Words
perspective, as has been already mentioned, the types of noise are 4, namely Trade,Train, Aircraft and
Industry
Use synonyms
.
Additionally
Linking Words
, as it is visible clearly from the graph, the number of people is calculated in millions.
To begin
Linking Words
with, from the first diagram which is related to the case of the cities, it's evident that the highest percentage of 64 is present for the traffic during the Day,
while
Linking Words
during the night, it illustrates just 48%. Continuing with the case of the train, its fractions are quite low. On a sunny day, it shows 10% and 8% for the evening.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, the other two cases represent the lowest fees, or rather 4% for Aircraft during the morning and 1% for the late afternoon;
Whereas
Linking Words
,
Industry
Use synonyms
gets 1% and 0.25%. In comparison, there is the second chart, which provides the same classification with shipment on the top, train as
second,
Linking Words
Aircraft as third and
Industry
Use synonyms
as
last
Linking Words
, as for the previous chart.
To sum up
Linking Words
, with what has already been compared and analysed, it's crucial to highlight that traffic is the
most noisy
Change the adjective
noisiest
show examples
transportation in both cases of cities and rural areas as well, whilst the
Industry
Use synonyms
is the quietest.
Submitted by veronicalindiner1998 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words industry with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: