: The charts below show the number of registered road vehicles in use in a European country in 1996 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

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The bar chart illustrates the amount of enrol road transports run in European from 1996 to 2006.

Overall

, private cars were the means of

transports

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transport

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hit

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which hit

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the highest point in

all

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apply

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the period.

While

a negligible decrease was seen in the number of registered trucks and motorcycles.

According to

the chart, private car registration stood at 19

milion

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million

in 1996 and

then

grow up to 24

milion

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million

in 2006. Another type of vehicle

also

increased during

this

time but at a significantly lower rate, the number of these vehicles increased from 1.2 million to 1.9 million over the course of ten years.

Besides

, there are half of

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the milion

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milion

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million

lorries

which

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apply

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were registered in 1996 compared with one

milion

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million

motorcycles

registed

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registered

in the same year.

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2006, the figure for both

these vehicle

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this vehicle

these vehicles

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fell to 0.4 and 0.6

milion

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million

, respectively. The number of bus registration still remained unchanged in

all

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apply

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the period, with 0.1

milion

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million

buses

were

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registered

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from

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1996 to 2006, buses were the means of

transports

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transport

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with the least amount of.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words milion with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

172 words

6.50

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Clear and correct grammar

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