The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

A trend has been observed that in a number of

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nations,

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of overweight kids rose

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20%, over the

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decade. Most of them have unhealthy eating habits and are

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influenced by aggressive advertising.

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essay will delineate some solutions related to prevention programs which follow to limit

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trend. The foremost reason for

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trend, as previously mentioned is associated with

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of

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from markets. Nowadays, people choose

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habit

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great providers to use artificial substances, or to grow plants and animals in artificial ways.

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entire process,

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to raise the profit margins, but at the same time, affects general health

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for

children

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, because they are in

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process.

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, fast

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companies invest every year, millions of dollars in advertising, to promote their products. Processed products have dangerous amounts of fats, sugar or salt, which

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regulary

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regularly

consumed,

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the rate of obesity and other chronic diseases. As a solution, governmental institutions should invest additional

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to introduce prevention programs in schools. During classes,

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should learn about the importance of eating organic

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, or which categories of aliments can not be mixed,

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example

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bread with chips must

to

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be avoided because those two have similar kinds of carbs.

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, national programmes should offer free training sessions for overweight kids. Finding

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to practice daily activities, most of the kids avoid

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. Special programs with low rate intensity adapted for certain persons can cogent more people to join in and to improve their quality of life. In conclusion,

overweight

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being overweight

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amongst

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children

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is a real problem underpinned by the poor quality of

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and the lack of movement. National institutions should raise

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public awareness about

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this problems

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and

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invest

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funds in

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children

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education.