The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The pie chart and the table are about the preferences and choices of
visitors
from various parts of the world such
as Asia, Europe, the USA and so on , at a particular Australian resort.
Overall
, the chart illustrates that most of the visitors
are from Asia as well as
Europe whereas
, the percentage of tourists from America and other nations is less.
37% of Asian visitors
have visited this
resort which is in fact the highest percentage among other travelers but their average stay is only one week. Whereas
, 35% of European foreigners visit this
resort and their average stay is of 16 days.
Furthermore
, European and travellers from other countries prefer Camping or caravans whereas
Asian and American sightseers prefer 5-star and 4-star hotels. Asian and American people do sightseeing as their main activity. As per the survey, swimming or surfing is the main activity of European sightseers. However
, visitors
from other regions like to do surfing as their main activity.Submitted by sku75179 on
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