Achieving
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of humans depends on
luck
mostly. In some situations I agree with
this
view,
on the other
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that achieving aims requires some
skills
and
education
.
Therefore
people
have to improve their
skills
duringChange preposition
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life,
they have to always try to be successful.
Sometimes the success of
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depends on their
luck
.
People
should not make
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for achieving something.
UniverseAdd an article
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just gives them what they want.
Although
it is like
lotteryAdd an article
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, today they can be lucky,
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tomorrow they can not be. One of my
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very lucky person. Because he always wins some gifts on
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. He just shares with posts in his stories and
at the end
he wins some perks like gadgets. Despite winning he could not control
this
lottery and sometimes he can just take part in lotteries from sponsors.
For instance
, nobody can
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control their
luck
, but some
people
can be lucky more than others.
Mainly
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achieving
goals
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with
education
and some
skills
.
Therefore
everyone has to improve their soft and hard
skills
alsoCorrect word choice
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try to take quality
education
in the best universities of over the world. It will certainly lead to aims. Some
people
should take courses to take new knowledge to be more successful in life. In every area
goals
require improving
skills
, good health,
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management. Some
people
can achieve their
goals
,
howeverCorrect word choice
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can sacrifice health.
InChange preposition
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this
everyone has to control their ways and keep balance.
In conclusion, achieving
goals
in life
relatedAdd a missing verb
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to
luck
. In some
I agree with
this
position,
although
aims require some
skills
and
education
from
people
.