The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. What extent Do you Agree or Disagree ??

In the modern ,era people do not interested in films or TV shows without

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, authorities can control

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from

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and television

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due

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crime

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in society. I largely agree with

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notion

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because it

is influences

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society. There are a lot of types

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of violence

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violence

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scene

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scenes

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shoot

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in

movies

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or television so young people

are easily influence

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by watching

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. To explain it more, authorities should give proper guidance to viewers before the

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movie

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which they cannot do that type of activity.

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, nowadays youth want to watch only thriller

movies

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such

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as murder

scenes

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, rape

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,

gangster

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, and terrorist.

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,that their mindset starts working like a psycho.

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90% of the audience

like

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to watch only action

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, they do not like horror or love

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,

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rates are increasing day by day all over the globe.

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, censor boards are responsible for

this

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violence

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in every country. In more detail, If a

movie

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director

released

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their

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in the the theatre, it should be certified by the censor board. The censor board should remove the adult

scene

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scenes

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or more violent

scenes

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from the

movie

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by

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doing

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it

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will be beneficial for reducing

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in society.

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to

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, in

movies

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, heroes or heroines live a luxurious lifestyle

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which, youth are

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by them and commit a

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for money.

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, India News revealed that

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20 to 30% of prisoners commit

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crimes, and they were influenced by watching

movies

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or web series. In conclusion, authorities cannot stop

violence

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without public support but censor

board

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also

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contribute to their work

such

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as cutting some

violence

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, nudity or many other

scenes

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